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Tuesday, October 2, 2007

An Unfinished History

AN UNFINISHED HISTORY
and A Rebuke of Former Musings

Light gathers on the crust of dawn,
Releasing drip by drop
A trickled arc of palest sun,
That vests our heaven’s top.

The dawn of peace may take an age,
But comes with waxing pace,
For in the blackest, cruelest page,
The man of yore found grace.

Ah, and here I sense an urge,
A primal, whelming call,
To draw these lines that I might purge,
The fog from verse for all:

To counter songs of bleakest sight
That from these fingers flew,
I write assured that human plight
Will stain the hands of few.

For champions of mental man
Will cleanse – are cleansing now –
Through open hearts and gentle hands:
Acts in reach of every brow.

Join that partial throng of beast
Who walk (in partial line)
Towards partial light above the East.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hi Isaac. I like this poem most. I wrote about it today on my blog.

ihop unpublished said...

I am very flattered by your evaluation of the poem. I wrote it around sunrise after I pulled an all-nighter -- the parallels and symbolism of the sunrise just suddenly came to me.
This is the first time that anyone has seemed to really take the time to delve into a poem of mine and see what's there; I am absolutely thrilled that I did get my point across! You pointed out detail after detail that I took an hour to weave together but wasn't sure anyone would understand. This pleases me to no end. Thank you!

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